Discarded
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It was all too familiar. The concrete slab, the smell of urine, and the waiting, there was always the waiting. As he sat under the florescent light, he knew he didn't have many chances left. He had been a Max, a Champ, a Buddy, and at one time, a George. Time was running out, few people chose older dogs. At this point he rarely even bothered to put on a show when the squeaky gate opened.
So when Elliot entered and walked by cage 5, he had no reason to think that day would be any different. The dog watched as the man passed, wearing a long sleeved shirt with jeans, along with well worn boots that had a hint of manure smell to them. Puppies are at the end of the block, he thought to himself. They always put them in the back so prospective adopters have to walk by us old saps.
He listened as the man made his way down the aisle, stopping at cages and looking at the other dogs. He heard the way he spoke to the dogs, as he tried to coax them from the back of their cages. Then he heard the boots make their way back towards cage number 5, his cage. The man stopped, and then knelt on one knee.
Hey boy, it’s okay. Come here boy.Normally he would have ignored him, but this time he couldn’t. There was something about him. He found himself getting up before he had even realized he was moving.
That’s it boy, come on. He approached timidly, smelling his hand. Elliot passed the smell test and was allowed to pet his head. He’d forgotten how good this felt. Hey Buddy…you seem like a good boy.
Margie, a long time volunteer saw the man taking an interest to cage number 5.
“I see you've found Charlie”
Yeah, what’s his story?
“He was dropped off by a younger couple, said they didn’t have time for him.”
“How long ago?”
“Oh, almost a year ago.”
“Any idea how old he is?”
“We’re guessing around 8, he’s as sweet as can be, just kinda sticks to himself.”
“Any idea of the breed?”
“We're not too sure, maybe some sort of hound, it’s tough to say. Good looking guy though.”
“Charlie, huh?” Elliot said, stroking the dog's chin.
Charlie was actually nine, but appreciated the compliment. Elliot continued to stroke his chin, and Charlie was content to let him. The last couple had tied him to a chain in the backyard one day and left him there until they decided he was too time consuming. And that was one of the better places he’d lived.
Before that, it had been the abusive drunk in the basement apartment. The man had been pleasant enough in the beginning, but began kicking and throwing things at him as the drinking escalated. One day, after being let out to do his business, he had made a break for it.
So had been the life for Charlie, shelter to shelter, with a few homes in between. He had grown accustomed to this way of life, never getting too comfortable. For some reason, after all he had been through, he still wanted to trust humans.
“Can I take him outside?” Elliot asked.
“Sure….if he’s willing to go with you.” Margie answered, not unlike a protective mother.
“Come on Charlie!" Elliot said, patting his knees. "Do you want to go outside?”
To Margie’s amazement, Charlie was up and more than willing to venture outdoors with the stranger. She handed Elliot a leash and they headed out. Margie smiled as she watched Charlie wagging and wriggling with more energy than she knew he had.
A half an hour later, they were back, and a bond had formed. It was obvious to everyone that Charlie was not going back into his cage. Elliot was looking down at the dog when he said “I’ll take him.”
Margie, who was about to tell Elliot about the adoption process, decided to let it pass, there was obviously a connection with these two, and this may be old Charlie’s last chance.
“Right this way guys.” She said with a smile.
Papers were signed and goodbyes were said, Charlie had become sort of the shelter mascot, the dog everyone hoped would go to a good home yet never wanted to see leave. Margie almost shed a tear as she watched Charlie jump into the cab of Elliot’s truck. Elliot had promised to keep them updated.
“Whadya think, huh boy? Do you like the name Charlie? Me too, let’s stick with that.”Elliot couldn’t help but notice Charlie’s eyes. Sweet loving eyes. As he looked at the dog, he wondered what he had been through. The dog’s eyes spoke to him, almost pleading with him to be a fair, good master. Elliot started the truck. “Let’s go home Charlie!”
Over the next 5 years, Charlie learned what it meant to be loved. He returned the favor as well. He adapted to being an inside dog, enjoying his runs with Elliot as well as the warm nights on the couch. He was there as Elliot married a wonderful woman, who just so happened to own a dog. From then on Charlie and Toby, a 4 year old jack Russell, became best of friends. The two of them became inseparable and spent hours chasing squirrels on walks.
Charlie began to forget his troubled years. He slept late, snoring at times, and enjoyed his evening walks with Toby. It could be said that Charlie, the journeyman dog, was spoiled. His only worry was the occasional visit to the vet, but even this was tolerable after a few treats. For a dog that was bounced around so many times, Charlie embraced his role as a family dog, almost as if he wanted to repay Elliot for rescuing him years ago. He rarely left Elliot’s side, loyally doing whatever was asked.
Charlie lived out his later years peacefully and he was always grateful for Elliot, the man who saved him from his cage. Towards the end, as he slowed down, he would curl up beside Elliot and look at him with loving adoration. He was graying, and a little slower in his movements as well as his thoughts, but he never forgot. He never forgot what Elliot had done for him.
Copyright 2012 Pete Fanning
Other Short Stories By Weestro:
- One Last Game
With new ownership replacing Frank's beloved stadium, he has one last stunt up his sleeve. - The Spectator
Richard left town years ago, leaving his baggage behind. Now he's come back to see how things turned out.
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amberbartlett is not the only in tears. What a touching, heartfelt story. I was so moved while reading it. I hope it's an inspiration to folks looking to add a dog to their family.
So good! Love that you did it through Charlie's eyes!
What a wonderful, heartwarming story, for once! If I was able, I would make it my life's goal to make as many dogs as possible have a loving, stable life; they all deserve it-they didn't ask to be born. I just can't comprehend it is feasible for a human to terrorize a helpless animal of God, especially when all they ask for is someone to give them their well deserved love & happiness. Their only purpose is to find love and feel safe, loved, comfortable, and be assured their family will never abuse them or toss them out like trash. I am very, very adamant about doggies, I own 3, but would love to have many more and take the doubt out of those sad eyes staring thru cages, that they will always have an unhappy existance. I cannot bring my self to even look in pet stores, shelters, or even listen and watch the ads on TV regarding adoption. I commit each month to several animal shelters, many are no-kill shelters. I have 3 Shar Peis that we had to send to heaven 6 mos apart and I have never had to do anything as gut wrentching; however, they are with us today. I regret not laying to rest the many other doggies as I did those. But, they all are looking down and letting us know they are happy and so thankful we were their parents for so long and are having a blast with their past buddies and family. One last thing, please, please don't allow your best buddies to be selfish and let them suffer-in the long run, it will haunt you more than it hurt them.
Beautifully written story that made me tear up. Voted Up. GClark
Wonderfully written story. I warned my husband when we were married that I did not get a dog and give it away a year later. I keep them until they pass on and they are loved the whole time. The only time I have given one away was when he and the other family fell in love with each other and they were happier together. I really did have too many at the time. Couldn't see a couple go to a kill shelter when I had the room and the money to buy dog food.
Great story, weestro. My dogs were also adopted from shelters, both as adults, and they have been very fine companions. Can't imagine why anyone would have discarded them.
I knew I was going to cry after the first two sentences. These were tears of happiness that you rescued this deserving dog. I've owned rescue pets my whole life. and currently have two cats. I miss each and every pet I ever had.
Just recently I had to put down my 19 year old cat. Needless to say, it was heart-wrenching.
Many years ago I did volunteer work for an animal shelter, where once a month I would take a puppy or kitten to a nursing home. What joy that brought me. I so loved sharing stories with the elderly about their pets. We shared tears and laughter, and it warmed my heart, as I'm sure it did theirs.
Lovely story :)
I am SO estatic with the comments we have received! Y'all must be very caring people and pet owners and I commend you for that and taking time to read these articles and become involved in the Blog.My Brother just lost a shelter dog after many years of unconditional love; he and his wife are like us-never without a pup! My brother and I were evidently deprived when we lived at home-no pets allowed! They immediately(no disrespect to Jubilee) found a wonderful dog named Blaze at a shelter event,a year old husky/shepard mix; then, lo and behold, his wife's sister needed to let go one of her 3 dogs and asked my brother if they wanted her...WOW. What a treat- Bailey already knew them and she's a wonderful 1 yo bordie collie! What a special blessing! So, this weekend, they are taking extra days off from work to get them accustomed to each other and their new environment! I am so happy for them! Just knowing when you walk in your door at home, there will be a "greeter" waiting, who has been waiting for you all day for you to give love and he to receive. When my three dogs died so close to each other, after the last was gone, I could not stand how quiet it was when I walked thru the door. Well, "a hunting we will go, and go, and go!" I'd still be going!They are much work, sometimes stubborn, messy, but those minor things mean nothing as compared to the many, many years of love to come. One of my mini-schnauzers jumped on my lap yesterday after "swimming" thru the back yard & I was covered in mus as well as he; he just looked at me like "get busy cleaning me off"! That was worth it!I've harped long enough this time!!! Bless those who feel as I...go hug and kiss your pet, thanks
weestro thanks for the link to this most uplifting and happy story. I've always thought that the best companions come from shelters and such. Yes indeed, guess you could say it was almost love at first sight between Elliot and good ol' Charlie.:)
















amberbartlett 3 months ago
I'm so embarrassed...I'm reading this work and am all teary. Amazingly written.